Desiree Span

As a writer who’s just starting out, I've felt like Sarah’s been a teacher to me. She not only pointed out my mistakes but patiently explained why a plot idea or some character development didn’t work then guided me with helpful recommendations. She included feedback on sentence-level edits and word choice, and I made a list of the most essential tips and I've pinned that list on a board near my desk! The comments in Track Changes were insightful, and I especially loved the ones expressing Sarah’s liking and enthusiasm for certain paragraphs or sentences. This gave me confidence and kept me motivated. It was a pleasure working with Sarah, and I've managed to revise my manuscript into a novel I'm proud of. - Desiree Span