Standard Developmental Edit

Fee: usually £25 or $31 per thousand words (80,000 words = £2000 or $2480) 


Your developmental edit will be designed especially for romance.

In the editorial report, you’ll learn the strengths and weaknesses of your romance plot and the reasons why you are succeeding or failing. I’ll provide you with suggestions for how you can address the problem areas, and you can then work on them at your own pace. I’ll also include comments directly in your manuscript, including my emotional reactions, praise and encouragement for what’s working, and feedback and tips for what needs improvement.

If you’re the kind of author seeking out detailed, thorough, and story-craft advice specific to your plotlines and characters, we could have an awesome partnership.

If my standard dev edit sounds perfect for you, let’s chat.


 What you get:

  • Editorial report – usually 15 pages long, single spaced

  • Plenty of comments and notes directly in your manuscript

  • One (one-hour) book-coaching session – a follow up chat, or even brainstorming, after you’ve been through the report.